Monday, 12 October 2009

  • My Worst Enemy

    This is a short story by Ted Dekker I found on his facebook page or you can otherwise look at his author website at www.teddekker.com
    I absolutely loved this little story I had to post it on here for you all to see. Comment and let me know what you think or better yet email Ted and tell him he rocks!
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    The Boar

    I always wondered why babies cry when I walk by, and now I know. I am a beast.

    You ask me how I know. You see, I was walking through a beautiful forest on a Sunday afternoon stroll when a horrible snort sounded in the bushes to my right. I whirled and came face to face with an enormous hairy boar with two red eyes and long bloodied tusks.

    I couldn’t move. But when the boar charged I managed to uproot my feet and run. Through the brush, over rocks, leaping ditches—I don’t remember because panic had shut down my mind.

    Blind with that terror, I ran straight into a small canyon and pulled up hard at the base of a cliff. I could hear the beast’s snorting behind and I knew that my back would be pierced by those tusks. When I spun to face it, the boar slid to a glaring stop, a ferocious sight that turned me to ice.

    It grunted once and charged, and I lost my mind to fear. I screamed bloody murder and threw myself directly for it, perhaps with a desperate hope it would turn and flee.

    It did not flee. It took me head on.

    But instead of smashing into those bloodied tusks, I crashed into mirrored glass that shattered and fell to the ground. I stood panting. The boar was gone. The only blood was on my forearms, where the mirror had cut me.

    So you see, that is how I know that I am a beast.


    My response, as with many of you, is D. Myself.
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